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Child's Weep

No one hears my cry No one hears my weep No one is for me When I go to sleep No one holds my hand No one wipes my tears No one cares for me For so many years Mother told me once To God, I should pray And his every word Quietly obey Will God hear my weep? Will God hear my cry? Does he see my pain? From the big blue sky? It is hard o God It is hard you know But I pray to you Every night and more...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/13/2013 10:18:00 PM
Elizabeth, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new upcoming week. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA*
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 4/14/2013 1:23:00 AM
Linda, love the words you sending my way, thank you so much and enjoy your day... :) Ellie
Date: 4/9/2013 1:45:00 PM
Such a lovely poem! you can easily ease in do the words as you read it.The words flow forming such a simplistic yet a deep poem. Great job. Mary xx
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 4/14/2013 1:19:00 AM
Thank you Mary for your great comment , God Bless and have a wonderful day Ellie..
Date: 4/8/2013 8:44:00 AM
great write Elizabeth, really enjoyed it. I must read more of your work. indeed it seems God can be far away but truely He is always near. God bless you today. Gordon
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 4/8/2013 10:56:00 PM
Thank you Gordon for your time to read my work, and thank you for your nice comment. Ellie
Date: 12/4/2012 3:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..I can feel the pain of the child..Even though sometimes it seems God is not there, he is though..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 12/4/2012 10:05:00 PM
Sara, you right, God’s presence is everywhere in good or bad. I wrote this one as a reminder that, so many children living in poverty Thank you Sara for taking the time :)

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