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Children of War

A little child cries in the night Hope still a small flame inside Longing for arms to hold her tight Only hunger and fear abide Hope still a small flame inside Tears her only form of release Only hunger and fear abide Wanting the horror to cease Tears her only form of release Unable to understand civil war Wanting the horror to cease Always afraid of an opening door Unable to understand civil war Her family dead in some grave Always afraid of an opening door No longer the will to be brave Her family dead in some grave Longing for arms to hold her tight No longer the will to be brave A little child cries in the night Written for all the children who are victims of civil war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/28/2011 4:10:00 AM
An excellent write,very touching.Congratulations on your big win.
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Date: 7/28/2011 2:12:00 AM
Heart-wrenching Pantoum. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Barbara. lainie
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Date: 7/27/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congrats BG on a great win in Pantoum with this wonderful write luv...
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:34:00 PM
So touching. Many congrats on all your wins, Barbara : )
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:17:00 PM
hey Barbara, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:30:00 PM
I smell 1st place! This one slices the heart then pours vinegar into the wound. Only your slice is simple yet lovely language and startling images that will linger long into my night... because they are real. I thought the "afraid of an opening door" was the best line, the 'vinegar' as it really drives the terror 'home' (a place a child SHOULD feel safe in). This is my favourite entry in the contest. GOOD LUCK! Cyndi
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:21:00 AM
You go gal you sure have the line order right!!! Thanks for your sweet comment! Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:52:00 AM
A beautiful write Barbara! The message of tears for all oppressed children somewhere. A well penned Pantoum, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Barbara. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2011 8:30:00 PM
Beautiful and powerful, Barbara. I love it. Joe
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Date: 7/10/2011 6:18:00 PM
It seems there are children suffering on all areas of the globe, because of some civil war, or unrest. It is heartbreaking know that each night as we go to bed...and sleep with such a thought in mind. A moving and heartfelt poem, Barbara.
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Date: 7/10/2011 6:06:00 PM
that was beautifully done
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