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Childhood Fantasies

i was six and you were nine you would pack sunlight into a jar tell me it was mine. at night it lit my room. when the stars were out you'd throw stones to wake me up. butterfly nets in hand we'd catch stars from the sky save them in our pockets. i'd hand you my water gun you’d load one at a time pull the trigger and yell "quick wish on a shooting star." now twenty and more old i still have the jars i still own every wish i uttered silently on those moonlit eves. it was you in my dreams in my smile always kind. i only had one wish you and i clad in the innocence of those times, of dreams and laughs i only wished it would never end, and your sunshine safe in my memories our childhood sealed in those jars. Maurice Yvonne Sponsor: gautami phookan Contest Name:The Sweetest Touches of Verse

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Date: 10/25/2014 9:40:00 PM
oh also have to tell you that I read all the winners on that list that you recently got jilted on. Funny how the top two winners were not quite as good as the second place winners. Those were the amazing ones!! yours should have been on the list though. That was so strange.
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:38:00 PM
Belated congrats, and the one of mine that is like this one is called Jars, in my tanka forms. It is one of the few tanka poems I have written that I really felt was good. But it is sadder than your poem here.
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:36:00 PM
I am SO glad you got a win from her with this poem. WOW. It's amazing. This is the kind of poem from you the I really love, nostalgic and sweet. it reminds me somewhat of a poem of mine. I will go get the title to tell you. FAVE.
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Date: 10/17/2014 1:26:00 AM
These are beautiful memories that you've shared with us, Maurice. I really enjoyed this heartfelt and tender write. Congrats on your win! Very nicely done!
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:59:00 PM
a touching piece, speaks of close siblings or friends. well-done, Maurice. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/13/2014 3:02:00 PM
Wonderful Maurice...congrats
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Date: 10/13/2014 12:09:00 PM
wonderful memories Maurice many congrats on your win:-) hugs Janxxx
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Date: 10/13/2014 12:03:00 PM
Calling interesting memories back, congrats on the win, Maurice
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Date: 9/3/2014 11:03:00 AM
LOL... I will give you and L and the I... haha, Your reply has me cheering you on...LOL...Love Linda
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Date: 9/2/2014 11:39:00 AM
Hi Maurice, I'm back here again... Thank you for being supportive when it comes to me.. Your newest FAN... LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/2/2014 2:10:00 PM
thank you Linda, as for me i am not just a fan but a cheerleader too...give me an L...give me an I...
Date: 8/17/2014 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful reminiscence Maurice... Enjoyed. Verlena
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/19/2014 12:38:00 AM
thanks. enjoying reading you. lots of love.
Date: 8/17/2014 10:20:00 PM
wonderful memories and now you have it forever to pass down to family ... Light & Love
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/19/2014 12:39:00 AM
how sweet. thank you. lots of love.
Date: 8/17/2014 9:39:00 PM
WOW, Maurice, now that is truly something, and sweet. I never had a childhood like this. For them wishes, seem to be the best part of the fantasy.... A wonderful read... Linda
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/19/2014 12:42:00 AM
well if we can travel back in time, we could give it a shot. heeheeheehee. i am so mischievous. lots of love.

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