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Childhood Dreams For Contest

Reigate Juniors, late July, in nineteen sixty nine Miss Leggett crossed the room and slowly pulled down all the blinds as one by one the summer's morning settled into gloom the five of us sat quietly in the television room. Power on, wait for it warming up, and then channel select a picture slowly forming, didn't know what to expect grainy image, took a moment for our eyes to work it out and see just what the world outside was now talking about. Shimmering in UHF scan lines at six-two-five we watched a major milestone being broadcast to us, live. Ghostly figure, hesitant, and slow, considered pace was out taking his morning stroll far off in outer space. Every action analysed, each purpose predefined environmental figures taken, soil samples mined. No more science fiction, science fact, this vision real, our wondering just how for that one man the scene must feel. His colleague now with camera, the U.S flag he plants, a speech so calm, if it was me, I'd one sixth-g a dance. Outside at lunch in the playground we talked of how we planned in Tranquillitatis to be where Armstrong stood and scanned. To boldly split infinitives and bravely seek new worlds (but since this was a 'boys own' job, we'd have to leave the girls) Fast forward now by fifty years, the space race still not won, the kitchen sink is blocked and all the laundry's still not done. The body aches and creaks and groans, old age coming too soon, but inner child looks up some nights, and still salutes the moon. August 13th 2015, for contest 'Childhood dreams', sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 9/16/2015 7:42:00 AM
Had me wrapped in from the first verse. In 1969, my dad had just died and I watched that and thought if they can go to the moon why couldn't they save his life?? Great poem my friend. A7 Closing verses made me smile..
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/16/2015 9:08:00 AM
The eternal question, Robert- why not cure, feed, water and house first? The moon wasn't going anywhere. Roll on Revelation 21:4, I say. Regards to you and yours, Viv
Date: 8/28/2015 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win!!! Skyy
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/28/2015 10:54:00 PM
Thanks, Skyy, appreciate you dropping by. Viv x
Date: 8/28/2015 11:47:00 AM
A wonderfully wriiten piece Viv! Congratulations to your win! ;-)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/28/2015 10:54:00 PM
Cheers, Teddy, thanks for the visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/27/2015 7:36:00 PM
Wow Viv, i love this dream. Its still so pure and innocent. I love how u told it. Congrats on your win #7
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Date: 8/26/2015 8:35:00 PM
An enjoyable narrative in rhyme. This reader can certainly identify with the thoughts within an unrealized dream in the poignancy of your write, Viv. No wonder this got a top place. Congrats and hugs!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 9:11:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, apologies for my absence recently, had a lot going on. Still love you, though.. Viv x
Date: 8/26/2015 7:20:00 PM
Nice win, keep them coming! Light & Love
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Debbie, very kind. The advantage of ageing- more memories to draw from :) Viv x
Date: 8/26/2015 7:44:00 AM
I knew it would do well Viv. Once again, great poem!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 8:23:00 PM
Thanks James, now can you give me next weekend's winning lotto numbers please? Regards, Viv
Date: 8/26/2015 3:05:00 AM
Kudos on this winner. This puts both the dream and reality together in a way I would not of thought of doing.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 4:42:00 AM
Thanks for the positive comment, Dan, appreciate it. I was just fortunate it all came together. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/25/2015 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win Viv with this awesome narrative!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 12:43:00 AM
Thanks Dr Upma, very kind. Nice of you to drop by. Viv x
Date: 8/25/2015 8:23:00 PM
Beautiful narrative here!!! Congrats on your super win! I absolutely love those last two lines... very fascinating... Always, Laura
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 12:45:00 AM
Thanks, Laura. Incredible to think that the computer in your microwave oven is more powerful than the one that took three men to the moon and back. Viv x
Date: 8/25/2015 7:47:00 PM
Brilliant poem my friend, every verse of it...a7..
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. Nowadays, my 'one small step for Man' is the one out of bed to go to the bathroom..... Blessings to you and yours, Viv
Date: 8/25/2015 1:23:00 PM
Viv, Congratulations on your "Childhood dreams win." SKAT
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thanks, Skat, long memories can produce nice poems, as shown woith the submissions for this contest. Viv x
Date: 8/25/2015 10:01:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2015 12:02:00 PM
Am doing aok thanks - still struggling with this chest infection but hey ho I am still waking up every morning so it has to be all good lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, hope you're well x
Date: 8/25/2015 8:35:00 AM
Viv, your poem gave me chills. I love the way you wrote your poem. It made me recall that wondrous day, sitting on the edge of our bed with our 10-year old son and two younger daughters watching this amazing event. My heartfelt congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Sandra, very kind. One of those vivid events that many can recall in great detail. Another one was Concorde's maiden flight- we sat watching a black and white portable in the kitchen, and my Dad saying 'it will never get off the ground'. We had corned beef fritters for lunch. I always wondered why Concorde had frosted glass in the toilet- who is going to be watching you take a pee , 60,000 feet up? Viv x
Date: 8/25/2015 7:45:00 AM
I am back to say well done for your poem's 1st place win. Viv! Julia, xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thanks, Julia, a great crop of entries now that I've had time to read them all. Viv x
Date: 8/25/2015 7:43:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your wining poem Hugs Eve
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, nice to be in such good company, Viv x
Date: 8/25/2015 7:33:00 AM
Well penned ....Congrats on the win
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 8:47:00 AM
Cheers, Joseph, a great contest from Silent One that really drew on memory. Enjoyed it. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/25/2015 7:04:00 AM
What an exceptional piece of writing. I loved it from start to finish.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Richard, I usually seem to get the hang of it when it incolves a strong, cherished memory. Makes me want to go and build a model rocket. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/25/2015 6:37:00 AM
Viv congratulations on a brilliant write , you so deserved first place.....Seren
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thanks, Seren, a bit of a shock, but pleasantly surprised, I've been out of the loop recently for family reasons, but thanks for commenting. Viv x
Date: 8/24/2015 12:09:00 PM
Dream keeps you young for a long time
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/25/2015 12:01:00 PM
yes, we must all keep dreaming. Thanks, samiha. Viv
Date: 8/20/2015 8:54:00 AM
Yay as a lunar-lover i salute the moon with yah and am reminded of the celebrated moon landing as well by yor awesome unique recollection of it all. I guess i wasnt born when it happend. Yor rhyme scheme was brilliant too. Kudos. Great to read frm u again.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/21/2015 12:29:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, I appreciate it. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/15/2015 5:47:00 AM
An excellent poem, Viv. Julia, xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/15/2015 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Julia, seems a lifetime ago. Viv x
Date: 8/13/2015 10:33:00 PM
Such memories, and, Oh, the dreams. Like millions of other kids around the world, you and I will always share that moment (sappy, I know). Beautifully written, and as Bob Hope used to say, "Thanks for the memories," Viv. rjijr
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/14/2015 12:23:00 AM
LLAP, James. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/13/2015 1:36:00 AM
wow what memories Mr Viv :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/13/2015 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Jan. There is an old joke related to the subject, but I cant post it here, will Soupmail you x
Date: 8/13/2015 1:26:00 AM
OH....this is so good, VIV. I really enjoyed it. "One small step for man"....and all that. Those last few lines really got to me. This aging thing isn't any fun....Good luck in the contest. I've missed your visits.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/13/2015 2:08:00 AM
Oh.....hope all goes well....will be thinking of you. God bless
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/13/2015 2:02:00 AM
Thanks, Eileen, appreciate it. Sorry, I've been a bit tied up, good lady not too well, awaiting surgery in a few weeks, not a lot of spare time at present. Hugs, Viv x

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