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Chicken Little's Sad Demise - Fable

(7/5 Trochee Poem) Chicken Little, thinking that sky was soon to fall, saw a mortuary and crawled beneath a pall. He was in a strange dark box where a dead man lay. Then before he knew it, they hauled that box away! He was moved, but that poor bird couldn’t get a look, for they’d closed the wooden lid, Chicken Little shook. When the casket got dropped down in the ground so deep, Chicken Little, very scared, still made not one peep! He was sure the sky fell down when he heard the dirt being shoveled over him. This was gonna hurt! Nothing happened, but he could barely take in air. Am I dying? Little thought: Is the sky still there? No more would the animals hear poor “Little’s” call warning them of tragedy if the sky should fall. Chicken Little never guessed he was murdered by that same earth he‘d walked upon, and not by the sky! Moral: Fear can sometimes lead you into something far worse than you ever imagined, so be careful not to fear things too greatly! An oldie for Joseph May's Fabled Musings Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/13/2017 9:12:00 AM
This is such a lovely fable, Andrea with an excellent moral:) a 7:) congratulations on your well deserved win:)
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Date: 3/12/2017 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations Andy!! :) well done sweetie!! Big Hugggs and love. deb
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Date: 3/12/2017 3:04:00 PM
Great to read this again Andrea - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2017 9:15:00 AM
Here you are again in a most familiar place. Great going and congratulations for your win....
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with this fun fable, Andrea.
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:56:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Great fable with a good moral. Congratulations on your first place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:06:00 PM
Wonderful fable, Andrea, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/1/2016 12:44:00 AM
Terrific write, Andrea, a worthy topster. Congratulations! By the way, did you know that the guy who invented the USB stick died last week? They lowered his coffin into the ground, then had to lift it out and put it back in the right way round..... Viv x
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Date: 8/31/2016 6:08:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I agree the others, this was so original. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/31/2016 2:49:00 PM
A great moral for all,congrats Andrea!
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Date: 8/31/2016 11:20:00 AM
A chicken in a coffin? What a delightful children's fable indeed... Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 8/31/2016 10:58:00 AM
You killed Chicken Little, Andrea! Dig him up and make me some Italian chicken cutlets. Congrats # 1. :-)
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:59:00 AM
Oooh! How sad! I looovvveeedddd this poem! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:16:00 AM
Congs andrea, you're winner with this poem Love Bryan.. xoxox
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:23:00 AM
I love this Story Andrea and congrats on your worthy win...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:04:00 AM
Humorous but sad..it speaks volumes...something deep. Happy on your win. Love---rajat
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:30:00 PM
Such an amusing write Andrea - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2015 6:55:00 PM
ANDREA, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:00:00 AM
lol.... now i know what to read to my kids tomorrow night... LOL... pd
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Date: 12/7/2012 10:47:00 PM
Poor chicken little. You know now how I love poems about animals. My favorite animal to write about is the chicken. So of course I loved this poem.
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:10:00 AM
Really a sad demise!---kashinath
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Date: 3/12/2010 4:14:00 PM
Delightful amusing piece Andrea >> James
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Date: 3/10/2010 1:33:00 AM
oh youchy!! Irony to the nth power with your write here, Andrea! Better not let the kids know of this version though ;) but I enjoyed this poem of yours, of course :) best of luck in the contest :) btw will check out your blog after this :)
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:27:00 PM
7/5 Trochee...Wow! - Sad yet beautiful at the same time, Andrea...You are on a roll!! ...keep um' coming, my friend! - Tim
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Date: 3/6/2010 8:44:00 PM
Very funny and very sad...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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