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Chica de los Suenos

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Chica de los Suenos

Dream girl
dream of life

In this deep pale night
I open to you my soul

I wish to share 
this mystery called love

Imagine a love
alive and radiant

Larger than life
an endless blue sky

Blessed would be
the earth, the sun
the air we breathe

All of this
just because you are alive

All the wounds
of past loves

would disappear
into setting sun

We would go
much further
into this pale night

Where the sighs
of lovers echoes
reverberating around us

You the nocturnal flower
standing in the shadows

I would open sweetly
my life to you....

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Hi Ken; This is a beautiful poem, but I thought i was going to read a spanish poem. tell me do you speak spanish? I thank you for reading my poem - Dear Mother. I hope you also read part I. have a nice day...... Lucilla

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 8/21/2013 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer...Yes I do speak some Spanish but I am not completely fluent yet..Thanks for visiting.. Ken...
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:55:00 PM
    beautiful it is, my friend Ken, you have the touch, thank you so much Ken .

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 7/30/2013 3:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Danesh my friend...Good to see you over here as well.. Ken..
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:29:00 PM
    wow. now this is called poetry. Kenneth, a gift it would be. (once you share and open up) It's amazing how life falls in and out. and right now echoes surround this poem. the pale night imagery floats with passion. a number one poem in my heart. ... and I love the title. ... ps... im only sneaking on the soup for you right now...hugs. ..linda

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 7/29/2013 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gracias mi Linda, Happy you liked it..I was hoping you would see it..Wrote it for a special poetess...I'd be most happy to share openly...I'd like to know more about you.. Yours, Ken...