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Cherry Red Glow, Watch With No Chain

CHERRY RED GLOW, WATCH WITH NO CHAIN The beast, thus charred, bleeds red, from pit, alarmed. He checks the time, and time again. He set it once, a long… long time ago. All fettered to eternity – disarmed. He satiates his appetite with coal. Chews up each act of cherry red. Each piece a face, endless disgrace. The burning embers burn, so slow…his soul.
12/14/2016 End rhyme each stanza lines 1 & 4 What Was I Thinking Contest/sponsor - Daniel Turner

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Date: 12/19/2016 5:15:00 PM
You have a really unique take on this contest Kim. Bravo! 7 ; )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2016 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Date: 12/15/2016 10:40:00 AM
Very cool Kim. This was abstract and evoked a jazz bass in my mind. Good luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2016 11:27:00 AM
Awesome! Thanks, Chris!
Date: 12/14/2016 10:39:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2016 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi!

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