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Chanting Waters

Passage of the sea, Aquatic incantations: Devoted currents.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/11/2010 5:40:00 AM

Raul, this haiku is very lovely...a beauty...like the photo in your "Sunrise" contest. It amazes me how God created such beauty...But after all, He is God! As you see, your words have drawn me into beauty...thinking. Gracias mi amigo de poetica! (Did I say that right?) Smiles, Dane Ann

Marty Owens

Date: 2/8/2010 4:17:00 PM

This is so wonderful...I love the sea and to think of an "Aquatic incantation" Wow! Marty

Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2010 6:28:00 PM

I love the sound of the water, those aquatic incantations, you are very good at this style of poetry, well done... and thanks so much for your commnet on my poem, something to tell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/5/2010 4:58:00 PM

Raul, it is always marvalous to see another Haiku written by you. You my friend are a true poet heart and soul. Thank you for sharing this piece with us today. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/5/2010 4:32:00 PM

enjoyed reading

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/5/2010 4:03:00 PM

Tribute to the mighty oceans in Haiku .. beautiful Raul.. enjoyed this "beauty" full of expression.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lorenzo Carty

Date: 2/5/2010 12:39:00 PM

very creative.... LOrenzo

Skat A

Date: 2/5/2010 9:39:00 AM

THANKS FOR READING MY POEM. ''FORGOTTEN TREASURE''ITS ABOUT ME DISCOVERING POETRY AT THE AGE OF 12.I LOVE HAVEING FUN WITH MY POETRY.I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT IS A HAIKU POEM IS.I SEE YOU HAVE ALOT OF THEM.I CAN WRITE ALL KINDS OF POEMS .EXCEPT HAIKU,OR MAYBE I JUST HAVE NOT TRIED.

James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2010 9:16:00 AM

So many devoted waters on this lovely planet, following their historic courses >> James

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/5/2010 7:23:00 AM

Nature through your eyes becomes a religious experience.....which of course, it is! Beautiful work, Raul. Love, Carrie I thank you too, Raul, for such kind comments ....they mean a lot to me. :)