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As the waves calmly roll to the shore Angels fly above searching for more, The Ocean sends off a spectacular glisten Silence is golden, close your eyes and just listen... The sound of a gentle breeze flowing through our minds with ease, As time seems to just sit still there is peace and harmony you can truly feel... Not a worry in the world to wonder no storms nor rain, No not even thunder... Living in a life of hopes and dreams, not a problem in the world so it seems.. Unprepared for what will soon arise, The Ocean rumbles as the Angels cry... Fierce and Furious and full of rage, Just as a Lion chambered in his cage... With the strength of 10,000 men, I'm dazed and confused and don't know where to begin... Life seems to have just crumbled My hopes and dreams together have tumbled, Will I ever live the life of the sane, or continue living on a dragons mane...

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Date: 11/10/2010 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Edward. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:26:00 PM
Edward, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:38:00 AM
Edward, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Edward. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:38:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:52:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Edward. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 9:37:00 PM
Congrats Edward on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great choice... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/16/2010 1:20:00 PM
LOVELY WRITE, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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