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Changeling Prince

The air was filled with sparks so bright as ash and flick'ring fire abound The night was filled with fairy light and from deep down the drumming sound. And all about did wander round in forms both large and shimmer small walked spirits old of yesternight to lend a charm to each and all. The sky o'er head was filled with light and night wore the king’s Northern Crown. The stars fought with the fire flies flight as shadows marked the unknown. A royal night when love was sown, and bardly singing did enthrall their poetry did rich resounded to lend a charm to each and all. Around the fire stood bold knights and their ladies most well, unknown, secrecy was their honor-bright and amongst them stood the Throne. Changeling bride brought forth to atone promises too old to recall, tonight a fairy wife enthroned to lend a charm to each and all. Upon their heads set holly crowns their scepters of ash, I recall. Cloaks as light as gossamer shone to lend a charm to each and all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2011 11:29:00 AM
I must appreciate the classy twing that clings to every word here in. Quite a seasoned poet u are Debbie Guzzi, and your name sounds as thought it's right off a movie! Really awesome!
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. This had to be one of the more difficult contests for me. My entry didn't make it.
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:35:00 PM
sanamagan, lights! a fairy tale and myth that flies off the roof with both mystical and earthy imagery.." sceoters of ash.." thimps up for this shining win, debs! ..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:34:00 PM
A wonderful write. Congratulations on your Seventh place win with this lovely Ballade. Caryl
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:28:00 PM
You have painted lovely ancient pen picture, Deb. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:24:00 PM
It sounded like a magical fairy kingdom, Debs. Great atmosphere in this writing. Congrats with this form of poetry. One I have yet to attempt!
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:22:00 AM
This is so absolutely outstanding Debbie. I truly enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:50:00 AM
Quite a lovely fantasy, Deb. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:34:00 AM
Beautiful images, Deb, in this sensational Ballade. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:00:00 AM
This could be a fantasy ballade from old...or perhaps a verse to share with William and Kate....in other words timeless! Lovely work...Congratulations Deb on a well deserved win!!!
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:21:00 AM
I am highly impressed with your ballad. I haven't read the rest yet but if they beat this one they must be truly outstanding. I love it and it is in true ballad style. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:16:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Catie's contest with this wonderful Ballade entry.. enjoy luv..
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Date: 3/3/2011 7:15:00 AM
This is outstanding, Debbie! I can't stop looking up to view its mesmerizing content. I'm blown away by this piece. I think I'll email it to myself...lol. I've never done that before! I'll do it, so I can have easy access, if it's alright with you? Love this, thanks for sharing Debbie! Mikki
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:39:00 PM
Amazing! I love this! Very well done.
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:41:00 AM
An awesome Ballade which u perfectly penned Debbie.. great rhyme scheme and wonderful story ..good luck in the competition by Catie..luv..
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:38:00 AM
beautiful well written poetry
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:12:00 AM
Very poetic dear poet ! I loved this Ballad Debbie, and I'm not one who spends time with this form, yet, your title caught my eye, and this write was well worth the peek ! Have a great weekend Deb ! much love, james
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:57:00 AM
yes a real terror of a form! shiver
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:57:00 PM
This form is exhausting. Ive been working on mine for a week.. youve given me hope that it can be done. lol BG
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:25:00 PM
so very delightful and definitely poetic, a warm and powerful story you have weaved here so well,,Thank You for all your visits to my words and for all the words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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