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(22/07/2011) I look at your inside Definitely different from your outside I try to stir you and see what will happen Will you still you or hide behind weapon You change color straight away I’m disappointed in a way

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Joe Inka

Date: 11/30/2013 10:12:00 AM

I enjoyed the progression of emotion conveyed here . It reminds me a bit of being a kid and getting a gift only to find after opening it that it was a sweater or socks or something. Of course sometimes when you stir you get more than you expect. that's always nice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2011 9:56:00 PM

hmmm, to me this seems like someone cooking something that has changed color. What could it be!!

Dinda Minardi
Date: 8/7/2011 12:18:00 PM

No, actually, Michael was right. Have a nice day, Andrea :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/5/2011 4:43:00 PM

Reads like a lady who my have been fooled by the book cover or double talk...just my view...always Michael

Dinda Minardi
Date: 8/7/2011 1:11:00 PM

You know my writings so well, Michael. Thanks for the comments, a nice day for you! :)

Steven Henderson

Date: 8/4/2011 11:30:00 AM

Your words has me pondering many things. Thanks for sharing. Steve

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2011 11:19:00 AM

all of us have great expectations of others Dinda.. a precious poem expressing this so lovingly ..luv..