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Change the World

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I wrote this the day after the Pulse nightclub shooting in Florida

Stagnant hateful world we live Something has got to give Mass destruction of the human soul Innocent lives have become the toll False prophets who have manipulated the word Has planted a seed in every boy and girl It's time to take back ALL our lost And teach them love at any cost Stop judging people on how they look Or who they love,or what book

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/26/2016 10:34:00 AM

Teach them love.A good message.

David Waldrop

Date: 8/25/2016 1:07:00 PM

I believe things can be eye- openers. True poetry is able to touch the heart and move the soul. This is a very passionate write. And I deeply enjoyed it thank you.

Gail Lewis

Date: 8/24/2016 6:30:00 PM

Agreed yet its what you find inside you like you said that is your soul xx

Thomas Akritidis

Date: 8/24/2016 3:06:00 PM

A very nice poem that in a simple, but also in a very succesfull way shows the way, to build a human, happy and better world!!!...

James Inman

Date: 8/24/2016 11:39:00 AM

A deep first post Jessica. Nice word choices invoke a strong emotional response.

John Hardison

Date: 8/24/2016 12:21:00 AM

Well stated reaching rhyme, Welcome to Poetry soup. Peace, Love and Joy.

Partha Pratim

Date: 8/23/2016 3:45:00 PM

Strong moral values. wow

Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana

Date: 8/23/2016 3:06:00 PM

In every poem of yours I see the deep empathy you have for the world. How difficult it is to change the world and the psyche of mankind?! Can our poems do that?! I hope , I wish and pray aloud the God

Mara Prose

Date: 8/23/2016 2:37:00 PM

Well said!

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 8/12/2016 7:42:00 PM

I will never say a tragedy like a shooting has any posative side whatsoever. What i noticed in times like these though is that when sorrows and misery come, human hope, love and peace come to meet them as displayed by the thoughts in your well weitten poem. Excellent and welcome to the soup!

Cheri Teng

Date: 8/12/2016 12:24:00 PM

I like this. Very real and pure. ;) Welcome to Poetry Soup Jessica.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 1:54:00 AM

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Skat A

Date: 8/3/2016 1:01:00 AM

Hope you win the contest, Jessica, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**