Change

Sometimes I wonder how a butterfly feels, as it struggles to get out of its cocoon; beautiful, majestic, and radiant. I also sometimes wonder whether God sees my soul as a butterfly, trying to get out of the cocoon of old ways and stagnation; scorn, belittling, and character-assassination making my soul to get out of its old shell, finally radiating on my face and weight re-gain... Date: 28/07/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2015 1:34:00 AM

Congrats on another wonderful win Teddy with this amazing write!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/28/2015 11:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*

Skat A

Date: 8/18/2015 12:26:00 AM

TEDDY, Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/28/2015 11:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Sk! *^_^*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/6/2015 11:23:00 PM

Wonderful take Teddy, superb pen! Congrats on big win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/8/2015 6:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/6/2015 7:29:00 PM

I often wonder these same things.....only you have expressed the feeling so beautifully and the transformations we must make are the proofs of life. :) Congratulations!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/8/2015 6:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Carrie! :-) It's an honor to get a feedback from you! *^_^*

Jan Allison

Date: 8/6/2015 6:49:00 PM

Great write Teddy wise words indeed:-) hugs Jan xx many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/8/2015 6:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Jan! *^_^*

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2015 6:25:00 PM

Teddy, congratulations on your win, In Charlotte's contest... SKAT

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/8/2015 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Skat! *^_^* <3 <3

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/6/2015 2:57:00 PM

I see you again on my winners' list! you know I like your succinct but philosophical style...I just thought this was so well worded; I could relate to it on a personal level - congrats on your win in my contest!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/8/2015 6:48:00 AM

Thanks again for your applause Charlotte! I really appreciate the way you love my work! *^_^*

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 7/29/2015 2:22:00 PM

Deep ponderings...yes, the soul never stops evolving. This is but one of its many phases as it morphs to a higher consciousness ******* (:heers, Tbang

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thanks again for passing by my works Thabang! You are very right on that one! ;-)