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If I could change the world
With just a simple wave
I'd start with mental poverty
Free all those enslaved

I'd rid the world of malice
Put an end to human greed
I'd lay to rest intrinsic evil
Peace this world would see

I'd revive the tortured souls
And mend the broken spirits
Replace spite with kindness
Transform all the bigots

There'd be no such thing
As murder or victimization
There'd be global unity
One indivisable nation

~Camille Rose Castillo 2011

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  1. Date: 2/5/2011 5:08:00 PM
    Beautiful thoughts. You have a good heart. Ellen <3

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 4:07:00 PM
    I loved the words and the messege. super

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 3:38:00 PM
    Very powerful thoughts of will power to change the world as a better place, Camille

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 1:51:00 PM
    a safer place this would be, lovely write, enjoyed,..p.d.