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Below is the poem entitled Chains which was written by poet Raymond Ngomane. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Chaining my brain is not my game/ 
My writing keeps chaining lyrical strings to proof my poetry can be my bible/ 
We keep chaining verses in this poetry but this chains never passes the preaching to the right ears/ 
The disciples of this poetry are never here/ 
They chain politics to question the church of poetry/ 
They drink chains that bleeds poetry/
The crucifixion gave birth to hypocrites/ 
Poetry died for us who sin because we love not being poetic/ 
We play with words to chain chains that blesses the congregation with sounds like so and so/ 
But the eye that crucified poetry is the eye that gave birth to this chains of poetry

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  1. Date: 4/4/2014 1:55:00 AM
    You rock again:) this read had me in knots, a bit chained, but I will never be the eye that crucifies poetry:) Another interesting write from you, love it! Have a lovely weekend, Ray.

    Ngomane Avatar Raymond Ngomane
    Date: 4/4/2014 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahha thank you so much my friend. you have a blissful weekend as well.