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Ceremonial Paint:The Circle

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Ceremonial Paint:The Circle

~ To twine a vision of spirit and soul from bursting embers to blackened coal I search with elders through chanting cries where pale moonlight adorns our eyes in strength and pride we rise above to greet the gift of eternal love beyond the flesh immersed in light I wake in knowledge of endless sight a place where amber visions reign in lightening speed across the plains I reach the ledge where colors glow of endless fields I reap and sow I pause in moments to gather breath of life eternal untouched by death through rising smoke and sacred song nevermore shall my spirit long ~

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:03:00 PM
    wow, to pause that moment. good imagery. deep~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Hi Rick,I like what I read, ~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:56:00 AM
    Rick, :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:36:00 PM
    this is quite different and I like it very much. congrst on your win. BG

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win you old romantic you...Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 6:18:00 AM
    Rick, congrats on your win, I like this...David

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:26:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning spot Rick xx

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:11:00 AM
    Excellent poem, congrats on top ten win.

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Well done Rick ......Seren

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:52:00 PM
    It really does set that mood of being in a ceremonial circle, Rick. Very nice!

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 4:16:00 PM
    Hey there Rick soup mail Light & Love

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    Date: 12/29/2012 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 2:15:00 PM
    This is cool