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Cenote

Glimpse an empire in sweated palm burdened with pain centuries old; Horrors and stalagmites hang in beautiful tragedy Gods have told: Within soil surrounding bluest calm, such memories you hold.

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/29/2015 4:30:00 PM

Michele, love the imagery on this write, a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve

Linda Milgate

Date: 1/2/2011 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations, this is lovely to read.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/26/2010 6:47:00 PM

congrats on the win in the contest!

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/27/2010 5:38:00 AM

Congrats on your awesome win! Well done! love, shar

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/24/2010 8:02:00 AM

nicely done, and congrats on being featured this week

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 7/21/2010 8:20:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN! GREAT POEM! RHONDA HERO

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/20/2010 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in the soup contest.

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/20/2010 12:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win, Charles

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup Contest Michele. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michele. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 6:13:00 PM

Wow, such beauty in these three lines. Nothing like a poem filled with imagery. Congratulations on your win! LUv, Andrea

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2010 4:07:00 PM

So profound!!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win with this incredible Sijo, dear Michele. Love, Laini

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/18/2010 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Feb. 2010 PS Contest, Michele! Peace, Audrey

John Heck

Date: 7/18/2010 6:39:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in the contest! Peace always, John

Janette Fisher

Date: 7/18/2010 6:16:00 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week, Rgds Janette

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/28/2010 6:46:00 PM

Michele -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2010 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michele. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/24/2010 1:41:00 PM

Many congratson your featured piece this week. Enjoyed reading it very much. Rgds Janette

Date: 5/23/2010 3:59:00 PM

Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Sandra Hudson

Date: 7/19/2009 7:25:00 AM

This Sojo is in perfect form, one of the harder poetry forms to attempt. Thankyou for the honor you have given me. I will treasure it always-AA

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/17/2009 3:55:00 PM

"BLUEST CALM" IS A KEEPER. THAT CLINCHES THE ENTIRE POEM FOR ME. Well done, as usual. You have the true sensibilities of the poet. Thast is to be applauded. Thank you for your comments on Libertine. They mean a lot to me. Regards, GK.

Date: 4/25/2009 4:35:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for an interesting view. Much to think about here. Keep on writing! Karen