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We wave goodbye to winter with its ice and frost and snow That thick blanket on the ground it has melted long ago The icy fingers of Jack Frost now no longer feel the cold For brighter days of spring will warm his bones so old Dull dark days are behind us and the winter chill has passed Spring is waiting in the wings; golden days are here at last! Our clocks will soon spring forward and we lose an hour’s sleep Bright crocuses and tulips through the earth begin to peep We welcome in the spring, she is dressed in emerald green She drapes herself on trees where new leaves can be seen Lambs gambol in the fields oh how I love to see them play They bounce around so happily on a warm and sunny day Dainty daffodils dance delightfully in the zephyr breeze Unfortunately poor hay fever sufferers now begin to sneeze! Our days are getting longer and the sun begins to shine Oh how I adore this time of year - our glorious springtime! Contest: Celebration Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton 03~30~16

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Date: 4/6/2016 11:09:00 PM
Jan A., Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2016 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/4/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congrats Jan ! Your imageries are superb!
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Date: 4/4/2016 11:56:00 AM
Many thanks Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/4/2016 10:51:00 AM
Hi Jan, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I Loved your song on the theme. As always Jan, the poem is excellent, the Couplets flow so gently. Nature does come alive on the page, The imagery is great. An excellent work from an excellent poet. A seven and into my faves this gem does go. Hugs....Mike.. XX
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Date: 4/4/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike I do love your comments they always fill my heart with pride:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/4/2016 8:54:00 AM
I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
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Date: 4/4/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Hans - I write for fun and am glad you enjoy my poems:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/4/2016 3:00:00 AM
Congrats for yet another awesome piece, Jan!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/4/2016 4:26:00 AM
Many thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/4/2016 3:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Jan..
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Date: 4/4/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thanks again Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2016 12:11:00 PM
Very enjoyable couplets on the theme. Congratulations...
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Probir:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2016 10:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win well written xx wendy
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Date: 4/3/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Wendy it was a lovely contest to write for:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2016 10:34:00 AM
Greetings, Jan. I'm dropping by with my congratulations on your wonderful poem, " Celebration Of Spring. " Your imagery creates that happy and dainty feeling of spring. Thank you for your kind comment today. Here in North America, spring is marred by a chilly wind, it feels like winter again. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 4/3/2016 10:39:00 AM
Sorry the comment for Daniel jumped and the delete section in my outbox seems to have disappeared:-( We have a dull wet day here but last week had some glorious spring days - i do love this time of year and all the colour in the gardens:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Daniel - I also love daffodils for the beautiful golden colour to brighten our world - I love to see lambs in the field but do admit they are also very nice on my dinner plate!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2016 9:51:00 AM
Really wonderful imagery Jan. Crocuses and tulips are two of my favorites. Don't see many lambs in the US but they are cute. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Peace nice lady:)
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Date: 4/3/2016 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Daniel - I also love daffodils for the beautiful golden colour to brighten our world - I love to see lambs in the field but do admit they are also very nice on my dinner plate!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 10:37:00 AM
Date: 4/3/2016 8:54:00 AM
Lovely transition imagery of winter into spring, Jan. Congratulations on your fine placement. (Would you believe, after a very mild winter with no snow and very early spring, we received 3" of snow overnight!!) Poor flowers! Hope it melts fast. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/3/2016 9:09:00 AM
I do love this time of year Sandra so I really enjoyed writing for the contest - hope the snow melts quickly - it's pretty but it can be a menace!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2016 6:47:00 AM
congrats on placing Jan beautiful imagery hugs
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Date: 4/3/2016 7:06:00 AM
Many thanks Shadow I love the transition from winter to spring:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/2/2016 8:10:00 AM
This is a very good delightful spring full poem x
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Date: 4/2/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Wendy i do love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/1/2016 5:40:00 PM
Beautifully done with dainty images.
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Date: 4/1/2016 5:52:00 PM
Thanks so much Iris I do love the transition from winter to spring and the vbirant colours in the gardens:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/30/2016 9:22:00 PM
You even brought me smile and you know thats not easy! Thank you
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Date: 3/31/2016 1:58:00 AM
Got a funny one for later today - hope that makes you smile again:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/30/2016 6:59:00 PM
I love the springtime Jan. The newness and warmer weather. Also it's time for baseball with the kids. Lovely poem
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Date: 3/31/2016 1:58:00 AM
I feel the same Tim I love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/30/2016 6:57:00 PM
what a beauty, jan.. still on the road; so hectic!.. write you soon..huggs!
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Date: 3/31/2016 1:58:00 AM
Hope you are having a wonderful time:-) hugs Jan xx

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