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Cb Tribute Contest I-Jan, Broken Wings, Jo , Nette

Her beautiful WINGS may be BROKEN, but in so many lovely verses tears are spoken… Sweet JO is a light shining from the Lord above, full of grace, compassion and true love. Creative and silly and sweet as a peach, lovely JAN brings smiles when joy is out of reach. NETTE, full of beauty with kindness in her words, she delights us when we feel unheard. Community Builders: 1. Broken Wings 2. Jo Daniel 3. Jan Allison 4. Nette Onclaud CB Tribute Contest One Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2016

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Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/23/2016 8:09:00 PM

Such meaningful words, Laura! Congrats & love, Balveen

Constance La France

Date: 10/23/2016 4:19:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your win in the contest and for that beautiful tribute line to me, it touched my heart ~

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2016 3:53:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2016 12:45:00 PM

- Lovely tribute, Laura :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/23/2016 10:32:00 AM

Beautiful tributes Laura..Congrats on your win

Augustus Black

Date: 10/23/2016 2:19:00 AM

Oh, wow.. Just lovely. I just love this write, it deserves great victory on many levels. What a brilliant work of mind here from the writer. Nicely composed, congratulation for the first placement. 7

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/23/2016 1:55:00 AM

Dear Luloo, lovely tribute to lovely Poets here! So nice! loved it!congratulations on your sweet win sweet Poetess!// love, Anu:)

Darren White

Date: 10/22/2016 11:38:00 PM

These tributes are so nice, and you even made them rhyme, that is so awesome!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/22/2016 9:25:00 PM

This is so nice ,good write, great tribute, Laura, and congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/22/2016 9:10:00 PM

Hi Laura, This is a fitting tribute piece to all four ladies. You are a community builder as well. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2016 8:17:00 PM

this is adorable, Laura!! Love how you emphasized each one's name inside the text and how you used metaphor and simile to show their talents! Congrats in my contest.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/13/2016 1:53:00 AM

Great tributes, Laura:) And thank you for that line on me:) I never thought that I would be among the first five on Community builder's list, it was a surprise:) I cherish your friendship:)

Joseph May

Date: 10/8/2016 6:25:00 PM

Lovely tributes...

Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2016 1:43:00 PM

thank you Joseph :)-luloo

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2016 2:59:00 PM

Such terrific lines for these talented poets.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2016 1:43:00 PM

thank you Tim :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2016 2:18:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely line about me LuLoo - I do try to entertain with my poems even during very sad times I can still write with humour I think its my coping mechanism. I know I gravitate towards people who write fun poems when I see them on the list:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 10/8/2016 2:32:00 PM

it's true! you're the smiles at PS :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2016 12:58:00 PM

- Lovely written, Laura - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 10/8/2016 1:44:00 PM

thank you sweet Anne-Lise :)-luloo