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Catch Me Quickly

If you can only see your love will set me free give yourself to me or you can let me be My heart has the lock your heart has the key take insert and twist an easy remedy Make me not wait I have chosen my mate this is our fate no time to be late I long for your love as I hope you long for mine let us fly high above until the end of time by: Virginia Frayer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/1/2011 5:04:00 PM
Okies this is rhyme but not enclosed rhyme lines 1 & 4 must rhyme enclosing lines 2&3, which must rhyme, then you'd have enclosed rhyme. Hope that helps. [verse 1 &3 are monorhyme, 2 & 4 are quatrain BUT label it simply rhyme and your OK] Light & Love
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Date: 2/6/2011 7:13:00 PM
a sweet and loving write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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