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Below is the poem entitled Cat which was written by poet Hanna Potter. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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It is the laziest of all creatures, 
It could eat and eat filet all the day long. 
Investigative eyes is a feature, 
And it will sing to you its forlorn song. 

It will avoid you like the plague by day, 
Skulking, running, bounding, from room to room. 
By night it searches through the halls for its prey, 
The hunted will meet its impending doom. 

The whisper of whiskers against the door, 
Tip-toe, pitter-patter, sneakily creeps. 
All at once bounding across the floor, 
Whoosh goes the paw across the mouse hole deep.  

“Drat!” says the cat, missed the mark once again, 
Once more the mouse hunt will have to begin.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem Hanna xxx

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 12:05:00 PM
    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:12:00 AM
    hanna, I didn't have time to see many poems on this particular winners list,but I am glad your title caught my eye. I love cats and love how you wrote of this one! congrats

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:13:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:57:00 PM
    HANNA Congratulations :-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Hello Hanna, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Hanna :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

    Potter Avatar Hanna Potter
    Date: 4/17/2013 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! I will be sure to read some of your poems! Could you read all of my poems and say what I need to improve on or if they are good at all? Bye!