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Castle On a Hill

Can you see that, there's a castle on that hill! A few seconds ago, it wasn't there, why, am I dreaming? Sincere I am in my statement, and I am not drunk! Tiny it does from here, but look, it does seem to be a grand castle Let's go, yes, let's do go and see what it is all about Exceptional! Have you ever seen such lavish furniture and the food, hmm, so tasty Other than me and you, I wonder who does live here, who does be the owner Normally, he should have made himself seen and heard by now As it is, a magic castle it does seem to be, see the pictures on the wall, they blink! Hey, it's late, we should make a move to leave, we'll come back tomorrow Indeed, the time was already six, but when we opened the door Lo! We found ourselves not in our country, not even on Earth Living shall you be, said a warm voice, with me here, in my time travelling castle!

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Date: 5/1/2016 5:57:00 PM
Hi A G Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:27:00 PM
What an intriguing tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations Anoucheka on the placement of the contest.
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