Casting

The sun castest its light Through the thick forest Giving life to all Causing the mist to rise Creating a scene of muted Greens and yellows Like a canvas painted By an impressionistic fellow

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2009 5:08:00 AM

Sara, Thank God for the sun that not only casts life giving light, but enlightens the heart, soul, and mind as well. Very nice write. Happy New Year, soon. Lovingly, Dane Ann

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 12/26/2009 10:21:00 AM

This is a beautiful write Sarah i dont know why but i love the title. like a canvas painted ses it all as this is a great work of art truely great write

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/26/2009 8:40:00 AM

I love this one Sara. i like especially the way you brought it together so masterfully in the last two lines.. That really completed the picture in my mind. Looks like you've got the magic pen today. Yup, this one gotta go into my favs.-Robert

James Fraser

Date: 12/26/2009 8:35:00 AM

Impressive piece Sara >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2009 5:54:00 AM

Lovely visual Sara and so looking forward to seeing the sun again after our gloomy weather here... your poem has brought sunshine this Saturday morning... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie.. SOUP MAIL REPLY...

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/26/2009 4:38:00 AM

I like this short imaginative and visual piece. Keep that crreative pen flowing.