Cascade

Dancing silver mists Drape like curtains over stone Proclaiming the Spring

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 9:19:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Mark

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/17/2014 4:00:00 AM

Thanks. I liked yours, too; especially the third one.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/16/2014 11:09:00 AM

Well done - congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/16/2014 11:35:00 AM

Thank you. I thad hought maybe I should have submitted my haiku Seedling instead. It was heavy with alliteration, but didn't really relate to the images. Maybe next time around.

Linda Jackson

Date: 5/16/2014 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Linda x

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/16/2014 11:35:00 AM

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 5/16/2014 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Lori

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/16/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thanks for taking the effort to comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:29:00 PM

Beautiful. Congrats on the HM.

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/15/2014 10:33:00 PM

Thanks. Maybe I should have entered Seedling instead, but wrote this one first.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/3/2014 10:05:00 PM

Nice haiku on proclaiming the Spring. Beauty of cascade. Loved always, my poet friend, bl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/30/2014 12:19:00 PM

Lovely haiku. Loved the dancing mists. Yes, spring is indeed a beautiful tie of the year. You've captured that! :) Thanks for your visit to my work.