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Carry Me This Day

The sun rose red Like a hot fire On cold winter's day Through the mist Shrouded fog, bright red It did blaze Scattered whispy clouds But some on horizon Of heavy charcoal gray Blessings they are To keep summer's heat Far away at bay The roosters' crow But faint the sound As if tired of heat Which they want to go away Or maybe the old ones sleep Before the misery comes to stay Mostly natures quiet this morn A crow caws here and there Few crickets chirp But the birds aren't up Or busily feed and drink Of dew laden plants Before sun dries it all away Fill me my cup with Moisture laden spirit Don't let it run dry today Give me bread from heaven To carry me all this day_ Free Verse for lack of what else to call it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/4/2012 12:20:00 PM
what a lovely write, my friend - and I loved hearing all those roosters and crickets : )
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Date: 8/3/2012 12:10:00 PM
God always bless you, i feel. Nice poem of nice expectation. Loved always,bl
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Date: 8/3/2012 2:05:00 AM
i love this write, sara! another masterpiece.
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Date: 8/3/2012 1:46:00 AM
Sara, I agree with Ruben, it's a lot more than that....Good luck for today...David
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Date: 8/2/2012 7:46:00 PM
This is one beautiful free verse Sara...I fell in Love with your title and it compliments your verses...beautiful!!!
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Date: 8/2/2012 6:11:00 PM
Wow, the beauty of this write is phenomenal Sara! I really enjoyed the creativity of the feeling you gave with each description! A dread to the mid day heat, but a delight to the morning dew! Wonderful write my friend! Great Work!!
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