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Circle of horses spins Carrying kids on flight Cheers for merry-go- round Create laughter with drools. Carousel thrills a play... Come, be a circus guest Curl up… join magic's tour! Pleiades C Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman 8/24/2016 Checked at www.howmanysllables.com

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Tom Arnone

Date: 9/2/2016 3:34:00 PM

Pleiades C. Magical Mystery Tour. :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 11:32:00 AM

I love carousels, Nette; they fascinate both young and old, and this write of yours tempts us to join you on this magical tour! ~ Congratulations on this merited podium finish:) hugs // paul

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/26/2016 8:19:00 AM

Pleasant, picturesque piece.... Congrats Nette, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 3:56:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Nette :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2016 3:09:00 AM

Life is a circus, we just have to mount the horse and not fall off too often. Congratulations. Lots of wishes, Kai

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2016 12:29:00 AM

Love the carnival atmosphere in this one, nette. Congrats! Viv

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 9:20:00 PM

It did take flight Nette! Congratulations on your second placement! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/25/2016 6:29:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your 2nd Place win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Your poem brings back memories of those happy days when our grandkids were little! Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 8/25/2016 5:14:00 PM

lovely Nette, congrats on your placement with this lovely poem :)-luloo

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2016 4:47:00 PM

Nettle, you painted such a joyful scene with your words. A delightful write. Con gratis on your 2nd place win! Blessings!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/24/2016 4:02:00 PM

Nette, I love the carousel. It was magic in my eyes when I was small. I am sure your Pleiades will take flight! 7 ; )

Lu Loo

Date: 8/24/2016 10:44:00 AM

Nette, lovely poem Kim will love this, good luck lady :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2016 8:25:00 AM

- A colorful and happy carousel, I enjoy my ride :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/24/2016 7:16:00 AM

The favorite of all the rides, this write brings me round and round with a smiling face.

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/24/2016 7:07:00 AM

Nette, even at my age I think I would still love to ride a carousel. When my kids were younger, we'd take them to ride and even then I would steal a ride. Lol So enchanting! Such a write of nostalgia for me. I smiled as I read and am still smiling. Thanks, nette.

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/24/2016 5:51:00 AM

Happy seven C sisters ... Loved them ...

Manny Paras

Date: 8/24/2016 2:48:00 AM

Your captivating poem captures a single moment and describes it so very well.This makes me want to take a ride, even for nostalgia's sake!

Amelie Mara

Date: 8/24/2016 2:33:00 AM

Carousel rides! It's one of those things that keeps me young. I enjoyed the energy and flow that you put in your fabulous poem.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/24/2016 1:47:00 AM

So delightful..the childhood memories this brings back...it's as if I can "hear" the music and "see" the children smile :-) Really amazing writing..to capture the "feel" in so few words is extraordinary:-) My best to you in the contest blessings, lynn