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Carolina Christmas

With squeals of delight and shouts of pure glee Rough-housing beneath that droopy pine tree Daddy feigns mad but we know he is bluffing Christmas was poor but we wanted for nothing Bolting out the door with sling-shots in tow Stalking Peter Rabbit and unconcerned crows Big brother scolds for poor shots and rushing Christmas was poor but we wanted for nothing Time to test-drive refurbished bicycles Sister lags back on her squeaky tricycle Granny calls out "Come for turkey and stuffing!" Christmas was poor but we wanted for nothing Grandpa gives thanks in his rough craggy voice All happy as clams but too tired to rejoice We doze by our tree with bellies near busting Christmas was poor but we wanted for nothing 8/11/2012

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Date: 8/14/2012 6:57:00 PM
This kind of Christmas cannot be beat, Tim!! You told it very well!!(love the title of it too)
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Date: 8/12/2012 9:16:00 AM
Family and love, that is what Christmas is all about Tim :) such a lovely write from you, wishing you the best for the contest.. Thank you for the smile you always bring to my face with your comments on mine ;) love Wilma
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:01:00 PM
A homey, family feeling - wonderful to dream about when the family is spread out all over the country.
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Date: 8/11/2012 10:21:00 AM
Ohhh! This one is has such great flow, rhyme and rhythm..Enjoyed reading today..Christmases of days gone by did not have as many tangible gifts but the intangible was wonderful..Thanks for you review of my work..Those eggs were tasty...Sara
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