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Carnival Night

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Carnival Night

Colored lights radiated dull skies’ darkness; Laughter mounts, organ pipe resounds joyous, drawing in more crowds. Scrambler whirls head spins all around; Tummy flops bright lights fade hot dog and soft drink escapes, into waiting crowd….
Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Nineth Place Winner ~ "Share A Shadorma” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Sept. 14, 2011

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  1. Date: 8/24/2011 9:09:00 PM
    Great description of the carnival, Caryl. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:41:00 PM
    Congratulations Caryl on a worthy present for the contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:03:00 PM
    this one did not deserve bottom spot. It's lovely, and you touched on the things I enjoy most about carnivals . Those rides! Love the creative way you expressed what happens in the last few lines!

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 2:18:00 PM
    Wonderful visuals here Caryl.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:27:00 PM
    I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. Caryl Ramsdale

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:16:00 AM
    Congratulations Caryl on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:35:00 AM
    Congrats Caryl on your terrific win with these elegant lines on carnival my friend.. super one..luv..

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Caryl

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 4:17:00 AM
    hey Caryl congrats on your win, david

  1. Date: 8/18/2011 12:09:00 AM
    I can remember those fun nights at the local carnivals, Caryl, and you brought back a lot of great memories. Best wishes in Nette's contest. Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 9:07:00 PM
    Oh dear!!! I'm afraid this happens more often than not!! Clever poem....this is so funny (as long as I'm not in the waiting crowd!!!)

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 6:45:00 PM
    sounds like super fun Caryl.. a treat for the whole family luv.. great visuals ..good luck in the contest..luv..

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 2:22:00 PM
    Great poem you entered also Caryl. Thanks for your nice comments on mine. I am sending a soup mail. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Thank you Caryl for sharing your creative poetry with us. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 1:55:00 PM
    wonderful write....reminds me of youth!!