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Carnival

The carnival is coming to town Double ferris wheel is my favorite Corndogs and caramel apples on a stick Give my tastebuds a treat! . -U:*:U- 'U'_\ / _'U' .. _I:I_ .. _____________ 'U' / \ 'U' / \ -U:*:U- __I______II______I__II________ II

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Yolaine Armitage

Date: 9/14/2010 9:46:00 AM

Very artistic, Doris! Fantastic short,poem...you are creative in your mind as well..Good! From, LadyPoetry!

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/4/2010 7:26:00 PM

Hey Doris, called your dare. Love your writes, and thanks for your comments. Great drawings!!!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/4/2010 11:03:00 AM

What a cool and lovely write with a beautiful drawing sketching the Carnival without a brush. You are a creative genius. Love this sweet little poem which reminds about the giant wheel and it's fascinations for everyone. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.........Doris Culverhouse.

Junice Lanza

Date: 9/3/2010 1:57:00 PM

sweet. haha. u said if i read your poems if i dare. so i did. lol

Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2010 7:04:00 AM

How creative and fun, when I was a kid, I used to wait all summer for the carnival to come to town in august for two weeks, and one time I got stuck on the ferris wheel, right on the top and it was a windy day... never went on one again, but liked many other rides and the food, and the sounds and the shows, great fun, thanks for taking me back in time, even if just for a moment~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/3/2010 12:33:00 AM

Smile ~ "This Is Soo Sweet; Soo Magical; Soo Soft; Soo Perfect; Soo, 'Beeaauuutifulll;' Just Like 'You, Beautiful Doris Culverhouse!!!'" ~ How very lovely & creative and, its aura seemed to fit the splendors of the majestic carnival for two loving souls ~ "Amazing, & A Fave; 'WoOwOoW'" ~ Smile, "My Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ "Have The Most Beautiful of Days Dear, 'Amid The Carnival of Love;'" Bye Beautiful Doris!:) ~

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/2/2010 9:00:00 PM

i reminder of days long ago for me, Doris, enjoy the carnival, Harry

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/2/2010 2:10:00 PM

Sorry I forgot to say that for the "Green Sauce" you just stirr in some horse raddish and mustard and add only salt and black pepper (ground). For the green bean soup you'll have to boil the potato cubes in about 1/2 litre chicken or vegetable broth and finally add the green beans and ham....Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/2/2010 2:08:00 PM

Enjoyed this since I was a child! Great write and imagery and design!! I served my speciial potato saldad yesterday together with mustard, horseraddish and tomato salad and of course Vienna sausages. Today I had red cabbage, boild potatoes and meat balls (from minced meat) and lettuce. Tomorroe I will have boiled potatoes with "Green Sauce" (made of Yoghurt and sour cream and 8 herbs, finely minced) and hard boiled eggs. Nice is also a soup from green beans, chopped ham and potato cubes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2010 12:21:00 PM

Doris, looks and sounds like fun,..love it,..p.d.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/2/2010 11:39:00 AM

Yummy!!! Caramel apples!!! I wish the fair would stay a lttle longer in our town, Doris. Hope you're doing well. Love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2010 10:35:00 AM

Excellent design and write...I would love a carmel candy apple about now..You know I really don't need one..Just a plain apple..Mom

John Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2010 7:37:00 AM

Ps. Smile ~ "Hello Again Dear Priceless Doris Culverhouse" ~ I just grabbed some coffee and I wished to stop back by to let "Your Loveliness" know that I appreciated "Your" questions & thoughts this morn and, I would have finished it last eve yet the comp went down & it was late but I have the day off today truly and I shall again finish it and return unto "Your Brightness" soon dear ~ "Thank You Again 'Precious Doris;' Love to You Always," John!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2010 7:06:00 AM

Smile ~ "Good Morning Dear Lovely & Precious Doris Culverhouse!!!" ~ I hope that life is going splendidly for "Your Radiance" this morn dear lady and "Thank You" for stopping by and in re unto the poe? Its about the sufferages amid Humanity within the world today; a topic I used to often write about when I first came to Soup....I need to finish it actually and grab a cup of java and then I shall return unto "Your Beautiful Heart Dear Doris" ~ "My Love to You Always," John!:) ~

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/2/2010 6:32:00 AM

Hey Doris, love your carnival ;) Ps: you are right.. I had it like that but made a stuff up when I added it on here.. Love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 5:07:00 AM

Delcious, thank you for sharing Doris. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 9:38:00 PM

You not only give us words to describe the carnival, but images too! Very creative, Doris! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 9:23:00 PM

Yummy good for all of the above..luv the atmosphere of this poem Doris... feels like Mardi Gras..luv.. enjoyed...

Shirley Bracken

Date: 9/1/2010 8:15:00 PM

I love free verse. You did a great job. I also loved the aet. Thank you for reading my poem/ Shirley

Tirzah Conway

Date: 9/1/2010 7:52:00 PM

Yummy! Have fun at the carnival for me! My book is on publish america's web site!~Tirzah~

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/1/2010 2:35:00 PM

Doris, this is great!!! I loved it...always luv Michael

Sheol Moribund

Date: 9/1/2010 12:43:00 PM

Dear Doris: Great poem!!! The illustrations really added to the poems content. BRAVO! Have a wonderful day. Peace: Sheol

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 9/1/2010 12:02:00 PM

everybody loves a good carnival. great write my dear. very creative.

David Smalling

Date: 9/1/2010 11:40:00 AM

MMMM ... an ideographic celebration of high imagination. Love it

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/1/2010 11:38:00 AM

Tombstones Lament is under Concrete Form used advanced searcg Doris. Someone having fun with the keyboard! Light & Love