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Caprice

When limbs of Montmartre tint the glow chemise de nuit falls to the ground, belle de jour, come moan a pale sound through alleys winding lamp light’s flow. Her fine heels toss on follies’ show she, au naturel , caprice bound ; taunting stars to rouse below. Uphill, this mistress wraps fired lips fleeting sighs mixing red-hot drips, amidst night bistros’ fragrant plight where rows of faces wet love’s sips. Then like a dream, her bedgown flips denying passion, oh one last bite. ©french sonnet/personification *Montmartre—famous Paris hill where art, music, romantic atmosphere, and bohemian culture thrive despite its religious strains. *belle de jour--- beautiful lady *au naturel--- in a natural state, also, nude *chemise de nuit--- nightdress . …. . by nette onclaud for Cyndi Mac Millan’s Un, Deux, Trois contest 31 may 12

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Date: 6/14/2012 5:29:00 AM
A belated congratulations Nette on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2012 10:51:00 AM
Ooo La La Indeed!! Nicely done, Nette!!
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:50:00 AM
Big Congrats to you nette xx
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:23:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:15:00 AM
Enjoyed your work with the French phrases...Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' cirlce ...I appreciate your selection of my work..This belle of a sonnet should be in the winners' circle in Cyndi's contest..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2012 5:09:00 AM
HI nette - Have a lovely SUNDAY !!! - hugs
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:59:00 AM
I remember the steps leading up to the church at Montmartre - phew! Loved this one, Nette. I can't believe how quickly your last contest filled - will have to get in quicker next time, lol
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Date: 6/1/2012 4:01:00 PM
and your wonderful sonnet should be read out loud to all from the Montmartre. so lovely is this nette
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:55:00 PM
Oh wow Nette! This is a magnificent, glamorous, sexy, and passionate write! I really enjoyed this revelation of a poem! You can surly create the greatest writings that I've ever seen my friend! You are truly talented! What a beautiful poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:54:00 PM
IMMACULATE WRITE!!! Reads like a winner to me...
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:38:00 PM
Ahh..c'est magnifique!! Muah!
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:07:00 PM
Hi nette - Another pearl from your pen. - Luck in contest. - Always/Anne-Lise
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