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Cant you see

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Cant you see

I see you, but do you see me?
Do you see what we can be?
We could be together forever,
keeping our love as low as a treasure...

I can see you very clear...
These feelings are kicking me in the rear...
I want to ask you a question...
But can you hear me? 
Can you see me?
I’m too afraid to go up to you...
I fear that you have more important things to do...

I see you passing by,
You took my hand as if it was planned...
We walked together,
When I’m with you,
I feel like my heart is lighter than a feather...

But then, our hands came apart,
but you took my heart...
and you did your part...
I saw you and my heart flew...
And you saw me, finally...
I know that this is true because i am with you...
And i love you...

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  1. Date: 11/15/2010 7:17:00 PM
    a sweet and loving write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.