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Can You Hear My Heartbeat

Can you hear my heartbeat? Its faint like I'm slowly slipping away My life was a positive path to greatness Now weeds are chocking the roses that indicate my path Weeds are all over the place, and I'm losing my way The sky had turned from blue to grey. Is this what Life has left to offer? cloudy days leave me yearning for the sun cloudy days are beginning to seem normal cloudy days oh how I wish I could see the sun rise one more time Am I doomed of a life of being anonymous? Does greatness elude me? I feel like I am failing, can you catch me before the ground does? crashing I need resuscitation So tell me can you hear my heartbeat?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/22/2012 12:53:00 AM
GREAT WRITE
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:54:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this. I love the concept of how the weeds took over. Very interesting indeed. Loved it! Always, Laura
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