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Can Not Fail

Hot ash plumes sky high, Raging magma, violent heat- now glory erupts.

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John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2010 7:58:00 PM

Nice job on earth's wrath garth. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 4/16/2010 9:40:00 AM

Captured the wrath of nature wonderfully Gareth >> James

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/9/2010 10:16:00 AM

a really wonderful contrast in your haiku here, Gareth, very vivid too :)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/9/2010 5:29:00 AM

What childlike delight in the perspective, almost what Wordsworth yearned for. One love

Date: 4/5/2010 11:48:00 AM

The vivid imagery works well in this poem. You've painted a picture with words. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/5/2010 9:42:00 AM

Very explosive write that I am reading this afternoon. Sara