Can I

Can I count on you? You say I can. But your words mean nothing. I don't want words, I want proof i want the truth. Say you will protect me. Now i want you to protect me! Make me believe you. Make me believe IN you. Tell me how you will protect, tell me you love me and care about me. All I want is the truth! Please I'm on my knees.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/13/2010 12:15:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/12/2010 5:23:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing..check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/12/2010 11:20:00 AM

Strong expressions pouring out in this deep write... great poetry my dear... always Michael