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Camp-Meeting Grounds Martha's Vineyard 2009

Summer lay lazily over the land. The languid weight of wind and water bowing tree limbs, chasing sand squalls over sidewalks. Cyclist meander down aisles of Rose of Sharon shrubbery past banks of day lilies and Pez-purple hydrangeas. Tourist, colorful as the flowers, buzz through seaside shops in flip flops the color of Necco wafers. Their gummy soles making sucking sounds upon the linoleum. In gingerbread slumber like fairy-tale children, they gather in pink, lime-green, and purple houses. The poor of a Christian God have become the rich of a capitalist nation. They hoard their paper-lantern dream.

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Date: 4/23/2016 8:09:00 AM
I like the dual-tone of this one, how the mood changed. It's sudden, almost shocking, but by carrying it out through the last three lines, it reminded me of a volta, instead. And look at YOU! 2009? You had it down pat seven years ago! WE just had to catch up! xoxox Dee
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/23/2016 3:20:00 PM
And look at the number of reads? Thanks Dee. I should take another pass at this and make it something else.
Date: 11/3/2009 8:16:00 AM
Wow! That says so much. I love reading and thinking about your opinions. And they are well put to beauty. Smiling, Dane Ann (Call if you wish.)
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Date: 11/3/2009 7:20:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Part of it is so peaceful. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/2/2009 5:46:00 PM
yes, I agree with the other comments, fresh, popsicle images make this art poetry beg to have an accompanying painting or watercolor or even something like Dane Ann's art!...gosh, Deb, your last stanza is wildly wonderful! "gingerbread slumber" whoooosh! cooool!!!!! (fav)
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Date: 11/2/2009 2:18:00 PM
I LOVE LOVE this poem!! Your candy-land descriptions are unique, clever and original...as is the paper-lantern dream!!! LOVE it!!! This poem as yummy as cotton candy!!
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:32:00 PM
Just beautiful, Deborah!! This had me transported to a beautiful summer day! Peace and love, Audrey
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