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Cameo-Who Has Believed Our Report

Across his back.. they laid a lash Upon his head .. a twisted crown In his side.. they thrust a sword Into his face they spat On a tree left to die ' it is finished' was his cry Bruised,despised..he took my guilt And by these stripes.. he healed More @ Ps 53

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Heidie Buys

Date: 8/9/2008 3:43:00 PM

This is superb, you have once again extracted the true and crucial bits and woven them together for maximum impact. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/8/2008 5:43:00 AM

Brian - I consider this moment in time to be humanities greatest shame - Hard to believe the pain our Lord endured just to save us - With the state of the world as it is I think of how hurt he must feel - Great poem Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/8/2008 4:53:00 AM

This story makes my soul hurt and shine all at the same time...beautiful tribute to the man/God himself...well done brian. Now...please tell me what Ps 53 is so I may read more? Thank you dear for your comments and compliments - they mean the world :), Love Kristin