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Cake, Candles and a Twinkle In His Eye ----- a Wish

With a swish In one breath, a Single request Had birthed hope.. _______________ Contest Poet ~ Rick Parise MY 7th Birthday (Bike)

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/31/2011 5:50:00 PM

This is a great acrostic, Rick..Simple, full of the anticipation of a child. The title draws the audience into the moment as well. NIcely written. Soup mail for you. Kudos, Gwendolen

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/28/2011 1:32:00 AM

* “Sooo Pleasing Is Feeling Absorbed In This Lovely Poem * Dear Gifted & Precious Rick. * The Swish Made Myself Consider The Pleasing Sound of All Net * Smile * Perhaps A Three Pointer Hail Mary At The Buzzer * Smile * Beautiful Verse. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2011 8:31:00 PM

nice acrostic you have here very orignal