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Cacti

You scrape a living in a harsh barren land, never ceasing the hope, that rain will finally come. Covered with spines, you brace, and wait out every storm, yet bearing fruit, just those few days of the year. You bring color to the desert, ever reaching to the heavens. Brushing off dismemberment, a new shoot where a severed limb once sprouted. Seemingly the giant of the wasteland, but often, merely a small potted plant. Knowing full well that the next day may very well be your last. The scorch of the noonday sun blazes down, drying, burning, razing to the ground, what has clung desperately to life. But still, the Cacti, endure...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/4/2014 7:39:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,ACan :) - I choose your first great written ode poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2014 10:46:00 PM
Thanks for the welcome, to Skat and Linda. As a side note, I meant my name to be A Can Of Tuna, but the profile creator didn't allow spaces XD
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Date: 4/3/2014 9:58:00 PM
Acan, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/3/2014 8:20:00 PM
Interesting poem, and Poetic Name... ACAN.... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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