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As the time flies ever so fast, You and I know our friendship will last As the sun announces the arrival of dawn, The clock of precious existence is forced to tick on When the stars gently twinkle in the sky, Lighting up our canvas of unremitting life, The earth will uncover the iridescent sea Revealing a smooth pathway for you and me But if the earth and its inhabitants spit us out, We still have the universe to ourselves, no doubt! There is nothing anyone can possibly do To tear me away from the likes of you Unless of course you request some space, I’ll stay on hold and patiently wait No matter where you go, name it; here or there No matter how far, I will surely be there So lastly, at the conclusion of this letter, I wish upon you happy years to come, forever For until that clock decides to end its chime You can be sure to find me by your side Always, Laura Elizabeth Breidenthal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/11/2012 3:08:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 2/6/2012 9:19:00 PM
fine tribute, Laura! jimbo
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:02:00 PM
Laura this was so enjoyable , eternity with the one you love is never long enough , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx
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Date: 2/6/2012 4:59:00 PM
Such a passion and caring for someone has been written so beautifully by you. Great job
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:37:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 2/6/2012 1:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful way to say I love you dear poet ! a wonderful and a lasting write Laura ! To mine favz of course ! Have a wonderful warm week....much love, james
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:37:00 PM
:D:D:D
Date: 2/6/2012 11:59:00 AM
Wanted to say congrats on your winning work "The Grieving Process" but my computer just sits there and spends and won't go to your work..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Very expressive...Sara
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:38:00 PM
yay! I edited it and now it's working! Fwee~
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/6/2012 1:20:00 PM
This seems to be happening to me too. I should probably repost it because for some reason it just isn't loading!
Date: 2/5/2012 11:28:00 PM
great flow of verse, and well done here, good rhyme to nurse, hot enough 4 beer, just now here.....the thirst:)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:38:00 PM
:D Thankies dearest.
Date: 2/5/2012 11:01:00 PM
Love this Laura, especially the acknowledgement of the need for space. and thank you for your thoughts when visiting my ocean of dragons, Wordancer
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Laura...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:38:00 PM
Um...your welcome?
Date: 2/5/2012 9:30:00 PM
wonderfully penned
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:39:00 PM
Gracias!
Date: 2/5/2012 9:05:00 PM
A nice poetic way to tell somebody that you will always be by their side. Good work Laura.
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