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Butterfly Ice Cream Little children all around me I can't catch my breath. Little eyes all trained on me and I'm scared half to death. Suddenly it seems to me by stage fright I've been bitten. The only reason I am here is to read some poems I've written. Still I sense the gravity of the words I choose to say. One day one of them might stand right where I stand today. Reading poems they one time wrote of butterfly ice cream. Or maybe of a prince somewhere they met in a dream. It's up to me this moment to nudge and to inspire. Then step aside for poetry to take them even higher. Raising up the bar it seems for some distant lonely night. When they too find some comfort in the words they someday write. Thank You for this chance Dear Lord and believing I could do it. Now Lord it's all up to You to somehow help me through it. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 4/22/2015 3:08:00 PM
a very charming and delightful poem. i'm sure you did fine and were very encouraging. i love the title, too!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/22/2015 3:19:00 PM
Yes!! I almost saved this title for another poem down the road. But I just couldn't take it once it was given lol. Thank you Ilene. God Bless!!! Ed
Date: 4/22/2015 9:04:00 AM
This is an encouraging, inspirational poem! It made me think about the bigger picture. Great job!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/22/2015 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Anna! :) Hugs to you! Ed
Date: 4/22/2015 7:25:00 AM
You will do brilliantly inspiring the children Edwin - your enthusiasm for your craft will shine through - just enjoy every minute - they will love you:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 7:28:00 AM
I live on a little 'rock' in the middle of the Irish sea - maybe that's why lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/22/2015 7:27:00 AM
You Rock!!!

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