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Butterfly Dreams

Saturday The day she rewrote herself No more sad songs With livelier tunes she sings along She has welcomed the call of opposites When she wishes to be alone she calls a friend If she is sad she tries on happy At first a game of pretend She changes her hair Relishes how the young men stare Subtle differences from the outside in She knows all things have to begin One step at a time Rewritten line by line This all feels like a Dream The changes pick up steam She now looks in the mirror She's not confronted by fear She doesn't look away Her life has become OK Not a simple chore But this woman wanted more Tired of waiting Locked behind a dark door That was not the life She had been made for That other her Has gone away Endless night Exchanged for day Reality from imagination The person she is was there She may not have known Yet others were aware Butterfly wings Beauty redefined Etched in bright colors Spread out with her mind Dedicated to Colleen I choose not to mention the contest because judging is very personal. I feel it was worth higher than a HM, I received 13 comments and a 7 rating.

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Date: 10/23/2015 10:06:00 PM
My last two N\As have burned me pretty bad. I know the feeling. I'm glad this got the. attention that it deserves because it's a beautiful piece. Wonder where Colleen is. Hugs, dear
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/24/2015 12:27:00 AM
I haven't heard from her in a while. I know the feeling a few of my recent ones have also been N/A. I know they are decent so I will rest on that.
Date: 4/18/2015 6:03:00 PM
Richard, Congratulations on getting the placement your poem did not get the first time... LINDA
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:12:00 PM
Very nice Richard and congrats!
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:43:00 AM
Richard, Your kind heart and wisdom or what is important. What a wonderful poem a 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:55:00 AM
Lovely to see it get showcased now Richard:-) Hugs jan xx and congrats:-) xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 4/15/2015 2:05:00 AM
I liked this poem very much Richard. Congrats.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Rob.
Date: 11/13/2014 7:42:00 PM
thank you for your comment.still dealing with staph in my ear.done fighting.thanks for everything you are a good person. luv colleen
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Date: 1/29/2014 11:05:00 PM
Richard What a lovely and beautiful write for this special person. I could feel all the emotion and love for her flowing from your heart onto the page. Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Why God poem.
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your love and kindness. I am leaving the soup. Can't deal with the drama on here. I am having surgery tomorrow morning. The infection is so bad they are keeping me after surgery instead of outpatient. 6 months of hurting I hope this takes care of it. Keep that pen flowing. Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2014 11:00:00 AM
Sorry to hear you are leaving, I try to float above the drama but must admit my bubble gets popped from time to time. You are still in my prayers, I hope you change your mind.
Date: 8/7/2013 10:03:00 PM
wonderful slice of life imagery, rich!.. congrats!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/8/2013 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Nette
Date: 8/7/2013 9:49:00 AM
Richard, , Congratulations! :-) :-) thank you for making my day a nice one... When you have time enjoy the winners and my beautiful blog * Called "Title That Reminds Me Of You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15763&PoetID=18720 ...always & forever *LINDA :-) >>>>>>>>>>
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Date: 6/29/2013 9:17:00 AM
had to revisit this one.Now I need to visit Baby Unicorn
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Date: 5/21/2013 5:37:00 PM
Nicely done dedication you penned here. I'll have to read from Colleen. I've been off line for 2 1/2 weeks. just got my pc back last night. Nice to read good poetry ;}
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/21/2013 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, so nice to have your visit
Date: 5/19/2013 12:46:00 AM
Sometimes I get a bit carried away with my commenting! I'll be sitting at my desk with the intention of posting a "short and sweet" comment, and it ends up being pages long... but I'm glad I don't bore you with my excessive rambling... LOL!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2013 6:31:00 AM
Never bored!
Date: 5/18/2013 7:54:00 PM
A very beautiful Dedication... Colleen's a very special poet friend. and she deserves our love.. I read her latest poem this morning, and her emotions are broken... I am glad she knows we care... LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2013 6:32:00 AM
Thanks, I hope she is able to step out of the dark.
Date: 5/17/2013 11:42:00 PM
I don't know Colleen very well, but the few times I have seen her around she seems like a very kind soul. I loved the part that went "That is the not life she has been made for"... it's captivating and makes me think of imprisonment... of knowing there's so much more out for you, but all you have at this moment is a window so you can see what you're missing. I hope she likes her dedication (I sure did).
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
I like your response Tim it is very poetic.
Date: 5/17/2013 4:28:00 PM
Such a display of images... You always know what to write and how to express it in the most elegant way. Reading you is like looking at a craftsman tediously working on a canvas. The more we looked and anticipated, the more the images flicker here and there to assemble with the last touch a complete work of art!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Guru Jad, nice to have a visit from you.
Date: 5/17/2013 3:24:00 PM
SERIOUSLY!I just grabbed the computer and turned it on.came straight here.THANK YOU.and first to comment again
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 3:31:00 PM
What is lost can be found. Time to get out your pen and start with the first line.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 3:29:00 PM
It is fitting that you should be the first to comment. Hugs Rick
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Colleen Bono
Date: 5/17/2013 3:28:00 PM
I am so lost right now.

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