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Butterfly Collector

(N.b- I abhor anyone who kills for beauty and art- just thought I'd let you know in advance x) Let me look at you- Aquamarine, ultramarine, powder blue like paper Angels jinking on thin string lightning wingbeats make your colours sing flitting, unconcerned, unbridled joy, loved you, stalked you since I was a boy. High on Lavender, bathing in the sun, pastel shades beating lazy applause joy cut short by me because.... I wanted you. And now you're mine. Here you are, ready to take flight but you can't. I've saved you, really. Whatever out there comes to pass can't touch you now- you're safe beneath this glass in stasis, beauty captured at a cost. Life was lost but... I too feel a sense of loss. Can't quite pin it down.

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Date: 11/5/2018 2:42:00 PM
Viv, special write and I can "pin it down" to exceptional thoughts - it's what a poet is born to do and you've done it here.
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Date: 3/9/2015 2:58:00 PM
this is really a very good free verse poem - love "paper angels jinking on thin string" - and that closing line is so clever...I see you're relatively new to the site, so a belated welcome! if I ever get back to running contests I hope you'll consider entering with precisely this sort of poem; you have real talent :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/10/2015 12:52:00 AM
Thanks for your feedback,Charlotte, you're very kind. Everyone I've bumped into on this site has proved very inspirational. Love 'n hugs, Mister Viv x
Date: 2/22/2015 2:17:00 AM
Deep but entertaining Viv...N B ...".The Road Into Hoi An 2"...now written as requested!...many thanks for your appreciative words...love and peace..Peter
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