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Butterfly

Willowy wisps of color hang in air, As bright rainbow palettes with silken wings. To dance aloft without a noticed care. Beneath the blue canopy, Nature sings. This delicate realm where my eye explores, From flower to flower they drift away. And savor sweet honey, their heart adores, The world turns slower each time they stay. They appear to float like beauty's pause. Kissing scented flowers as petals part. For a serenity shared, to my applause, And cause remembrance when they depart. Though a life form apart, colors entice. When we met as strangers in Paradise. contest..For men only, write about butterflies 12/3/15

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Date: 1/6/2016 2:27:00 PM
I find it quite intriguing, and often even amazing that so temporal a thing as a butterfly inspires so many different approaches to poetry (including my own) More and more, I see it, Thanks for yours!
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Date: 12/19/2015 8:49:00 AM
Quite lovely, congrats.
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Date: 12/18/2015 11:11:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely poem Frederic .. Congrats on big win! Awesome concluding line!
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:09:00 PM
Really nice Fredric. The sonnet form fits the theme very well.
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Date: 12/18/2015 3:21:00 PM
definitely a good result and write here Fredrick, congratulations.'
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Date: 12/18/2015 1:52:00 AM
FREDERIC, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:39:00 AM
thank you my poetic friend
Date: 12/18/2015 12:31:00 AM
Delightful Sonnet, Frederic, a real pleasure to read. Well done, Sir. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/17/2015 7:27:00 PM
FREDERIC, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 8:55:00 AM
Indeed, a really lovely sonnet, Frederic; love the imagery...and the end couplet. Congrats on POTD. // paul
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Date: 12/6/2015 4:28:00 AM
Sandra, this is good. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2015 6:54:00 PM
Frederic great imagery and a well deserved POTD Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2015 4:39:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats for POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:09:00 AM
Frederic, your poem is so full of appreciation and sensitivity for a beautiful creature of earth. Such a lovely Sonnet. Congrats on Poem of the Day. It should do really well in the contest too. Sandra
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:24:00 AM
lovely...congrats on POTD :)
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:23:00 AM
Frederic, this a beautiful sonnet.Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Enjoye the honor:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your Poem of the Day....very nice indeed
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:13:00 AM
Frederic this is a stunning piece. You are a marvellous poet. A Fav!
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Date: 12/5/2015 6:19:00 AM
- Congrats on your great sonnet, Frederic :) - P.O.T.D. !!! - Good luck in contest - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2015 12:44:00 AM
Terrific Sonnet, Frederic, this will do well. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:04:00 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Frederic and i love the alliteration too - good luck in the contest this is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx7
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