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Butterfly

She was delicate as a butterfly wing, intense black hair rolling down her back, dense dark eyes, a shaping of the lips for the necessary vowels hinting at other possibilities, a webbing of cerulean veins barely hidden beneath porcelain-thin skin. She was beauty, an angel of the second order. I wish I could recall her name. For "True Beauty" contest

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Date: 3/20/2013 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win Jack..Donna
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Date: 3/20/2013 7:34:00 PM
Thanks, Donna. It was a real surprise. Jack
Date: 3/19/2013 5:42:00 PM
Hello Jack, , your poem is lovely... congratulations with your winning poem~ always* PD
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Date: 3/19/2013 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, PD. I had no idea until I read your comment here. I should keep up better. Next time... Jack
Date: 3/19/2013 6:16:00 AM
Excellent, Jack! Congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2013 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, Caleb.
Date: 2/27/2013 5:34:00 PM
wow, this is breathtakingly beautiful. Soupmail for you in a few seconds.
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Date: 2/23/2013 2:22:00 PM
Beautiful..Ill bet you remember her name...lol...you always write the kind of poetry that I love. BG
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Date: 2/23/2013 6:25:00 PM
Well... It was a long time ago. Thanks for reading it, and for the very nice comment. J
Date: 2/23/2013 10:33:00 AM
Lovely, Jack .... take good care of her. - Have a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 11:08:00 AM
Ah, but this was long ago, in another life. J

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