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Clouds passing away swiftly.
Like the desert sand.
Laying peaceful on the ground.
Seeing the worlds silent stand.
Breathing faintly with no sound.
While my life slips back into Gods hands.
Counting each beat from my heart.
Leaving behind this shallow land.
Taking one last glimpse in my eye.
Something came to carry me away.
Without giving me a chance to say goodbye.
Not wanting a reason to stay.
Gliding away into the blue sky. 
Fully departed from my body where I lay.
My life in front of me revealed.
Blessing all those days I would pray.
God protecting me with his shield.
Kept his promise to take me back one day.
Now I am back where I belong.
Pass the horizon of the ocean sky.
Living among the butterflies.
Reunited with my love ones.
Who where also carried by butterflies.
For you I will wait beyond the sun.
Somewhere deep inside the skies.
When your life on earth is done.
You will also be carried by butterflies.

If for some reason you are carried of by bats.
It is your own fault.
You will be put in a dark cave with the rats.
All alone locked in your own vault.


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  1. Date: 5/27/2015 8:11:00 PM
    .This post needs major adjustment, will edit soon. Skat...

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:51:00 PM
    SKAT This is a very interesting and creative write. It takes the reader on a fantastic journey into your soul and heart. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Horsie poem..

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:24:00 AM
    yes! :-)

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 5:58:00 PM
    i just reposed this poem,, under p.d.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:05:00 PM
    Never read this one great lines again... When I read comments like yours it makes me try so much harder to write the next piece and reach out there to some one who gets you... xoox always Michael

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 5:15:00 AM
    This is really beautiful, Irma--Really enjoyed the imagery & message in your first part and I totally enjoyed the twist in the end--and it speaks so much truth too! never thought of that-being carried by bats!! I just had to smile over its uniqueness!! :)--keep writing!-nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 2:04:00 AM
    Thank you for your comment on "The Old Lady in Rome" and for all other kind comments! Have a great weekend!...Gert...Are you on facebook too?

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 7:44:00 PM
    really niice poem along with others i have enjoyed reading of yours this evening!!..thankyou for continuing to take an interest in my writing and for your kind words!

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 8:48:00 PM
    loved that one just didnt like that 4 those who will b taken away by bats.... thats harsh but good... i enjoyed reading keep it,belinda

  1. Date: 4/3/2010 10:58:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 11:48:00 AM
    this is beautiful. not only do i love butterflies. but you make your readers feel the nature of these wonderful flies. i think i will favorite just because it means something else to me. wonderful write. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 11:29:00 AM
    a great piece, well written and said. thank you for reading my the land just outside of heaven and for your comment. he was a great dog and friend, will take a long time to get over him if ever.

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 8:04:00 AM
    Yes I also believe in butterflies, Irma! When my grandpa died in the early 1950s, a butterfly flwe out of the windo and it was in December! Thank you for your comments and have happy Easter holidays...Gert

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 10:53:00 AM
    Hey there Irma. No more poems of yours for me to see that I have not already seen. You see how much I like you!! thanks for reading my poems recently. How are you? luv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 10:18:00 AM
    I love this, the firsst half is truly beautiful, the ending is slightly funny, and slightly unsmoothed. but, im not saying it takes away from your poetry, to use an example "sometimes the most beautiful face, is the one with bumps and flaws, rather then the one, like a china doll"

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 8:50:00 AM
    Great poem on belief, dreamlike- Smiles Irma

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 1:27:00 AM
    Beautiful poetry Irma one of your best(not sure about the last 4 lines though)notwithstanding that point it still goes into my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 10:31:00 AM
    Better to be carried off by butterflies than with bats. Very beautiful imagary and use of imagination. -Susan Mills

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 5:41:00 AM
    wicked slam---

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 6:39:00 PM
    A joyful read. loveit..smiles