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Burning Embers

Love begins like fire Stirring flames of desire Two souls smoldering Among ashes glowing Leaving embers burning ©Donna Jones

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John Posey

Date: 3/6/2013 3:33:00 PM

Such talent deserves many accolades. Well deserved win..... Jake

Donna Jones
Date: 3/6/2013 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Jake....:-)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/22/2013 8:01:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:18:00 PM

Thanks again connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 12:50:00 AM

Hi congratulations Donna luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:21:00 PM

More than enough thanks....much appreciated...

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/22/2013 12:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Donna. Love, Joyce

Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Joyce....blessings

Joseph May

Date: 2/21/2013 7:09:00 PM

congrats on your win Donna

Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:22:00 PM

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) thanks....

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/21/2013 5:45:00 PM

Short and enduring as love should be !! Congrats on your win !!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/21/2013 6:25:00 PM

Thanks. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 5:12:00 PM

Hi Donna, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD

Donna Jones
Date: 2/21/2013 6:26:00 PM

Thanks :-)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/13/2013 12:41:00 PM

This is very nice Donna, thank you for reading my "bible Stories" Genesis 6, job 1:6 and other places. You have a great day ;}

Donna Jones
Date: 2/13/2013 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Debbie...likewise...looking forward to many more...

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/13/2013 12:07:00 PM

Flame on! Sounds so gay. You know what I mean. :) Keep them home fires burning. Peace.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/13/2013 3:46:00 PM

Burning embers.. oh the good old days...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2013 5:00:00 AM

Very descriptive of new love..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, my Haiku was written from a life sighting..Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 2/5/2013 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by as well...I find this challenging given a title and subject.... different for me so thanks

Rollo West

Date: 2/4/2013 11:05:00 PM

Hi Donna, this is really very good, with great imagery. Thank you for commenting on my write. Rollo

Donna Jones
Date: 2/5/2013 11:10:00 AM

Thank you as well sir....look forward to reading much more of your work

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/4/2013 8:05:00 PM

Nice! Donna!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 9:34:00 PM

I find these poems tough to write when given a title to use and theme so thanks!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/4/2013 3:29:00 PM

I love this short verse, an exceptional write my friend! Your poem is on fire, as is the love you express! Quite the amazing piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 3:41:00 PM

Don't know if first reply went through....so thanks so much

Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 3:34:00 PM

Thanks so much....

Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 3:32:00 PM

Well...let us hope everyone has experienced this at least once. Lol back...see I can't even stay away a few hours! What am I gonna do?

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/4/2013 3:27:00 PM

You so brilliantly described TRUE love my dear Donna! How come you're such a sage on the subject! LOL Hugs, Jack xox