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Buried In Wait

Buried in wait This handwritten note As tidal caresses Soothe a patient scroll Forsaken sands keep vigil As Silence screams from beyond the bottle 19 July 2014 Poet Destroyer’s Contest: One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku- In A Bottle

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Tim Smith

Date: 8/21/2014 11:53:00 PM

Congrats Mark. Spectacular.... Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:26:00 AM

Creative write. congrats on the win

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:25:00 PM

This one is striking in its depth. Congrats on your win!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:21:00 PM

I'm glad to see this one finally on the winners' list. BIG congrats to you,Mark

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:42:00 AM

Mark, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2014 8:33:00 PM

did this one ever get judged?? What the heck is up with that contest? Am waiting to see all the winners, and in my box, I think it said I didn't make the list. So where IS the list???

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2014 3:18:00 PM

great expression, especially the last one. I am not sure, but I am thinking you can only show ONE senryu. the second one would be my choice for just one!!

Mark Trichet
Date: 8/7/2014 1:53:00 AM

hey thanks Andrea, wasn't to sure what a solo senryu/haiku was... I like the style of poetry though!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2014 6:24:00 AM

Very expressive work that you have penned the meaning hidden within the lines is quite sad..I appreciate you stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/27/2014 12:04:00 AM

Very nicely done my friend... Good luck in the contest!