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Bunch of Big Horses

Bunch of Big Horses What should I write about this fine day? Having no disappointment or any dismay Full of fun, merriment and much mirth My greatest poems that are here on earth. Many finally had known after they figured There are only certain things that triggered Things to cause a response and transaction Like my poems producing much satisfaction. Have you ever been on any ship cruises? For everything they had perfect excuses Ending up filling my mind with much doubt So this decided to write my poem about. Often some things appeared to be pleasing And this poem I wrote them was teasing My way through long line had to whittle Eating area was cold even in the middle. Meals to me simply had much to be desired And once current chef's contract has expired A few more facts cruise line they must face Neeeed to hire new chef in old one's place. They were cutting corners here and there Traveling anywhere is becoming hard to bare Which is thoroughly upsetting all the masses By becoming a bunch of big horses asses. James Thesarious Hilarious Horn, Retired Veteran Just got back from my two week cruise last night.

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Date: 6/8/2015 11:17:00 AM
This was a fun one James. I think a week on a cruise is about enough for me.
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James Horn
Date: 6/8/2015 1:25:00 PM
Started out in Southampton to Guernsey Island and to Ireland, Scotland and Normandy. That place was incredible, eerie yet quite and peaceful at same time. Jim Horn
Date: 6/5/2015 8:33:00 AM
Hi James! I hope that all in all your cruise was an enjoyable one; pity that the food department was not quite up to standard! Enjoyed your witty write! // paul
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Date: 6/8/2015 1:27:00 PM
Overall, the places we went to were incredible especially Normandy. Traveling overseas is getting to be a terrible experience for us older people. (74 on June 26.)

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