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Bumpy Bumpy

Long ago in the land of milk and honey Lived a sweet young lady with lots of money But the money meant naught She didn't give a snot Long as each night they could play bumpy bumpy © Jack Ellison 2015

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Tim Smith

Date: 10/28/2015 2:38:00 PM

Tickety tock, smoochity smooch, bumpity bump...the old headboard goes thumpity thump...aimless souls in lust...not looking for trust...empty feelings, another conquest, another hump

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2015 8:38:00 PM

"LUST" Absolutely love that word!!! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/28/2015 1:22:00 PM

You definitely found the land of milk and honey... For on PoetrySoup you write about the bumpity bump like you was a bunny... Fortunately the Limmericks are really funny... An it keeps folks really sunny... Hey! Reading your work is better than playing rummy... Think I need to wake up a might more... after reading this. Honestly! For sure!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2015 8:37:00 PM

Not really too bad for only being half awake... you deserve an A+ for effort! xoxox