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Fat bumblebees work
on pink hydrangea blossom.
Pollen-stuffed britches.

Days grow shorter, blossoms fade.
Honey enough for the winter?

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 8:56:00 PM
    this is adorable!!! Fall bumblebees!! Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Great Tanka..Descriptive and factual at the same time..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Frances. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 3:55:00 PM
    : ) HA! Bzzzzzeautiful! Good one, Frances! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 6:04:00 AM
    excellent bzzzz--charma

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 4:12:00 PM
    Nice imagery in this write..good work.

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 10:03:00 AM
    Light and lively write you have here Frances. Excellent. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 7:14:00 AM
    Nicely written. I like the line pollen-stuffed britches. Keep writing. Sara